WonderEssays

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Essay question (not less than 350 words):

The advancement of technologies has brought many benefits to teenagers. As a teenager, choose a modern technological invention and discuss three ways how it benefits you. Provide relevant examples where necessary.

Best Introductory Paragraph:

...If we compared to the stone age, I don't know how they survive their life without anything. We should be grateful because was born in this modern age with many great inventions around us.

(I sure am grateful!)

Best Body Paragraphs:

The first benefits of this technology (handphone) is communication. This is because in old time we want to call a person that using a bird that still give worried to the people that send the message wether the message had received by the person or not. This is because there have many possibilities that might happen to the birds.

(This guy is giving a voice to those birds. Smart alec! Err..WHAT happened to the birds, anyways?)

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One of the ways how computer benefits us is helping us in comunication. All computer has internet. Internet can provide us an email that can communicate us with our family or friends that live outside or inside the country. For example, there are many Malaysian that live at overseas for study or works. During Hari Raya or Deepavali or Chinese New Year, they cannot visit their family that live in Malaysia. During this day, email is playing an important role to communicate and release their miss towards their family.

(Uh-huh. I got you.)

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Moreover, using computer can get some money such as sell the compact disc (CD) that have been copied by the computer. We also can download the songs, video clips or games from the internet and copy it in a compact disc. So from this method we can get a income. Most of the criminal pirate use this technique to copy the video of film and sell it with a cheaper prizes compare to the original prizes.

(You've got to give him some credits for those 'enterprising' skills...)

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... If someone special is die, we can see he or she at our handphone through their picture. At least we can reduce our miss.

(Sniff...!)

Best Concluding Paragraphs:

...In this modern era techonologies, use all this invention wisely as just a Malay said, "Don't be as a frog under the coconut shell."

(L1=L2)

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...The usage of handphone in the life of the modern teenagers nowadys is just like the nail and the fingers.

(Did you mean: Isi dengan kuku?)

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As I told earlier, Nokia N Series bring a lot of benefits to teenagers. It not just affect the physical factor of teengaers, it also give positive affect in aspect of mental and emotional. N Series has bring teeanger to the new aera of life that is musch better than the pass. As a result, the teenager will become sostificated and high quality person. Nokia, connecting the universe to you.

(Nokia, you've got to hire this guy!)